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CARMILLA (cont'd)
This is all my fault. Look at
us—running through the forest like
bloody peasants. I should've
let Dracula kill me where I stood.
It's what I deserve.

PLAYER
I know you're hurting, Carmilla, but—

CARMILLA
Hurting? Hurting? You have no
idea what I'm going through. I gave
everything to Dracula an

SABRINA
Don't look at those rotting bones —
look at me! Still pretty, just the
way you left me. Do you remember our
last night together? It was our
wedding night. It was so wonderful!

She pauses, her smile fading at the thought of it.

SABRINA (cont'd)
It was the night you murdered me.

PLAYER
Wait — you murdered your wife?

MONOLOGUE
This guy smells like a million
dollars. He must live in the same
building.

You take a dozen steps closer before he finally notices you, and he turns his giant frame to face you.

THEO
Oh, hey. I didn't know anyone
else was up here. Am I being too
loud? I didn't mean to wake you.
I just need to get into my friend's
apartment. There's a... situation.

BEAU
Bertrand! Bertrand! Come back here, right now!
BERTRAND THE BOLT
Neigh! Neigh, I say! Sound the drums, let slip the dogs of war; the enemy is upon us!

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VESPIRIN
Defect of the heart? He was barely past his 30th cycle. It wasn’t his heart; it was murder.

INKA
Stop that.

VESPIRIN
Stop what? Kwin was murdered, and we’re-

INKA
We don’t know that.